I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Mahara my name is Dakota from Ahipara school. I like your blog about "Which comments are bad and Which comments are good?". Next time maybe you could make your writing easier to read. Keep up the great work!
Hi Mahara my name is Dakota from Ahipara school. I like your blog about "Which comments are bad and Which comments are good?". Next time maybe you could make your writing easier to read. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeletethis isn't my writing though
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