I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Mahara and Victoria its Elena from your school. I like how you did a story on the candy that disappeared but I have a question how did you get all the ideas for the story?bye.
Hi Elena, I really like your comment well here is how it all started, It really wasn't me who came up with all the ideas it was all Victoria.I was the one that write the story and she was planning person so we had it all orgnized.
Tena koe Mahara and Victoria this is Ellakaye here. This story on the candy that disappeared is very interesting, it has a orgnized planning and your senteces make sence. Keep up the good work!
Hi Mahara and Victoria its Elena from your school. I like how you did a story on the candy that disappeared but I have a question how did you get all the ideas for the story?bye.
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DeleteI really like your comment well here is how it all started, It really wasn't me who came up with all the ideas it was all Victoria.I was the one that write the story and she was planning person so we had it all orgnized.
Tena koe Mahara and Victoria this is Ellakaye here. This story on the candy that disappeared is very interesting, it has a orgnized planning and your senteces make sence. Keep up the good work!
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