I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Mahara, I don't think you'll remember me but it's "Vaa" from last year. I like this writing but.... I think there are some mistakes you need to improve on. The first sentence needs a , Until it carries on, But again I appreciate reading it just need to read again or proof read it! I miss you guys already! Hope you do to!
Wonderful to see you participated in the swimming programme. Pleased you are gaining confidence in the water too. Keep practising Mahara!
ReplyDeleteHi Mahara, I don't think you'll remember me but it's "Vaa" from last year. I like this writing but.... I think there are some mistakes you need to improve on. The first sentence needs a , Until it carries on, But again I appreciate reading it just need to read again or proof read it! I miss you guys already! Hope you do to!
ReplyDeleteThank you Vaa for you friendly comment
DeleteI really appreciate it
Also WHEN ARE YOU COMING BACK TO SCHOOL
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